D.K.'s Poems
~My Place of Poetry~ I am Demonskid, formally known as Inari. I sometimes have Art that goes with my Poems. You can find these art pieces in my art room "D.K.'s Canvas" If you don't like dark emo-ish stuff, click the back button. I don't need to hear people whine about my dark thoughts of my family and 'friends'. My poems my contain stuff that could be seen as atheism, and I shall tell you this now. I do not believe in God. I am more spiritual then religious. Please help me with my spelling and grammar. I am not a English or lit. major, I write these things for fun and to help me express how I feel at times. I do enjoy people telling me, "Oh you spelled this word wrong, here is the correct spelling". What I don't enjoy is people Flaming me because of my view and gruesome words. Any and All flames shall be used to cook marsh-mellows! Please Follow the Rules of the site and of these forums. Don't double post in here either. |
~Happy Poems~ |
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~Death Poems~ |
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~Haiku's~ |
~Short Stories~ |
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Open! :3
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Statue As the times come, they also go. Remember the sun over the rivers that flow. sooner or later that sun will die when it does the waters will dry what was once a plain is now a mountain the world will change now wish at the magic fountain Wish for love and laughter or for pain and disaster. I for one will stand by you no matter if some decide to abandon you Forever will I stand watching over the ones i love Forever will I stand a statue watching over you my love. |
Wrong Way Cross
Wrong Way Cross Thy heart upon a wrong way cross The love you felt is at a loss No more pain shall we endure Family ties hold you no more Blood is to be thicker then water May your soul forever be in Slaughter. [Wrong Way Cross Art] |
Trisphee Christmas Poem Sitting in the silent snow Always wondering where to go In the wondering, your butt goes numb Were is he? Is he going to come? On your roof you sit and wait, For the sound of a Reindeer Gait. Quiet quiet! I hear their bells, They are close I can tell. out of no where is a big red sleigh It is him! He has come today. Big red coat and a well groomed beard Santa has come can't you hear? He yells out, Ho ho ho Now little ones off to bed you go! Merry Christmas Trisphee! ~Demonskid 12-25-2010 |
Moment
In times of need you've shown me no greed and when I have cried a part of you died when ever you saw my tears In our past where I'll look last for a future of a moment of love that will wash away our fears Take one moment just a moment and look around our love is sound and let out our moments cheers (It came to me while posting in the games thread ._. Sucky Poems are sucky xD) |
I remember my creative writing teacher giving a rant about untitled poems, but I can't recall most of what he said. I think the gist of it was that it seemed lazy and like the poet didn't care enough about the poem to bother coming up for a title. Take that for what you will, I didn't think it was as big a deal as he was making it out to be, but then, I'm not an "internationally acclaimed poet"... *rolls eyes*
Anyway, if you don't mind me commenting, I think the last line is dragging this one down. It doesn't feel balanced after the first stanza, and if you were to add in two more lines (that rhymed with each other) so it mirrored the first, I think it would read better. As it stands, the last line sort of feels like it comes out of nowhere. |
Rapture Day
I'm to sexy for your heaven I'm to sexy for your hell So I am going to stay on earth With my sexy little self. |
I loves your poem since I got to hear it first on skype.
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Thank you nikko <3
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DK! That post was from like the first week I joined Trisphee! Feels like forever ago, though it hasn't really been that long.
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I noticed and its why I'm sorry x.x I don't post much in here unless i have insperation xD
that poem.. my muse was poking me with a stick to put it up.. then.. the muse disappeared and.. its been hanging there ._. incomplete.. Curse you Haideto! D< *stabs muse* |
Very nice. I like it DK, you have wjat it takes to be a famous poet. though nobody does it anymore nowadays.
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xD I could imagine myself TRYING to get my work published and yet still starving xp
Sadly not many people like poetry anymore.. At least not enough to support a poet. AND I finished that Poem! :D I changed the last line and added the last part finally =w= I didn't like it much xD |
Trisphee's Thanks Giving 2011
Today is the day to come out and play all dressed up and feeling plump Taddies and gravies Mens and Ladies Cookies and Pie No it's not a lie I'm surrounded by it all And I've come to call All to the table eat till unable I'm the Turkey and I'm Flirty Come get fat off of my back Legs and wings and all other glazed things Time to go take my wish bone Make your wish and fill your dish Sweets and Pies Are no lie For I am the Thanks Giving Turkey |
Tarot
Your future is bleak very mystic turn the card and look far in to your soul seek your goal the spirits are with you they'll guide you to the place you need to become the person you should be |
I find your Thanksgiving poem rather funny. :D Exuse my while I go snicker then comment on the other poem.
And for you tarrot Poem, it is rather a downer. But that I say "Seek your goal" at first as 'seek your gaol' and wondered why you had gone for older English and why the person was seeking a jail. O.O But other then my own reading errors I quite liked it. ;) |
xD Glad you enjoyed it. I dunno why I made a Thanks Giving one.. I hate Turkeys and Turkey day >o
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Lethargy Halloween
Halloween is coming Halloween is here dont worry my children there is nothing to fear Warlocks and Witches Dead bodies in Ditches Come over for candy you'll get something dandy this is our guild event you'll leave tired and content I forgot I had this one.. it was sitting on my DA xD made Oct 09 |
Mom's Birthday Poem.
Blow out your candle and grab the handle of the knife and give a slice Your Fifty Eight now have some cake Now your old but here I was sold something you love from someone above no longer here but you hold him so dear I love you Mom now eat your damned CAKE! Happy 58th Birthday |
Omg the halloween one sounds like it could be a part of a song
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xD I was singing it when i made it. I come up with odd things at times ._.
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Haha that's awesome
weird is good.. all my poems are depressing nice to see some playful funny things |
I get inspiration from odd things. so my stuff varies from how i feel
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Yeah I can tell o3o
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Transition Event
Post here, Post there Don't spam, post every where earn the currency swift and easily show how much you care Event shop things will make you scream happy with delight feel as though your in flight with those decayed wings |
OMG I found something I had written back in 03 for english class xD Hyjin made me remember i had it
Pretend This is a thing used millions of times People use this act every day I pretend to be sane and happy Underneath I am alone and sad People pretend to be my friend How do I know? They say they would do stuff with you Then turn around and make excuses. They say they are your friend But during class they don't even know you are there I once knew what it was like to have true friends But that has gone away I see a new style and I'm afraid to try But when I do, they say I am posing them People tell me I should try the new look, When I do I am copying them Who are my friends? I don't know Do I have any? Probably no. The people who say I'm their friend They just pretend I am very tired of their lying And very tired of crying They lie to me and just, Pretend . |
yay i made dk remember something... and it sounds like what is happening now
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