[DarkForbidden-Love]

It does make it much nicer. :)

And I'd love to help you out because it has such a great beginning.

The idea of having a companion who helps her is a good one, and having him turn out evil is a great plot twist. But what is the evil? Is it a dark type of magic, is there an evil group that he is part of, or is he a single person acting on his own that is evil?
The Indigo World seems to me as though it is done in the shade of purples, is this an incorrect image?
And since your character has appeared next to a wall it would make sense for her to be curious as to what is behind the wall. Perhaps this is where she meets the man who will help but is evil? Or maybe this is the place to which the man is leading her?