[whitexsuicide]

I am so afraid to post this up here, for i don't want it to get stolen. So this is how i am gonna do it. I will post up a bit of my story every once in awhile and if i get enough comments and such i will post more, until i have no more.

I have started a story and would love to know what i would need to fix up/ change. I'll start out with a couple of paragraphs, try not to hate on me to much, please.