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Ludovico
Hakuna matata
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the only advice I can give you is that even the best art can not save you if you have a bad story. Its kinda the skeleton that brings the art to life. So make sure you have alot of things worked out and flushed.
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Posted 11-23-2012, 01:31 AM |
Ludovico
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My only other thing is that even pages with just two people talking need a little dynamism. I would trying playing around with face shots next time you have pages of just too people talking, perhaps a close up of the main characters expression or something.
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Posted 11-23-2012, 01:47 AM |
Ludovico
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XD haha So I just realized I watched your blog.
So what is the over all arching idea of your comic? | ||||
Posted 11-23-2012, 02:05 AM |
Ludovico
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Yeah I started watching your blog when I first joined tris about two years ago.
Hmmm and who are these people? | ||||
Posted 11-23-2012, 02:19 AM |
Ludovico
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XD ah it makes a bit more sense when I read the prologue. I thought it just started from chapter one. And yeah the pacing is a bit off.
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Posted 11-23-2012, 02:27 AM |
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